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Careless driving
I would like to write about careless driving, the world is suffering from this problem. There are many causes, but I will talk about drunk driver, driving without license and using cell phone while driving.One of the causes is drunk drivers, when they drive they could make an accident that effect some families, like run over human being or hitting children, it could even kill someone. But the government became very strict about that. Second cause, driving without license actually in this case it may be less dangerous than drunk drivers but it still may go to make an accident also. Young people don’t know what the law rules are when they drive. The third cause, it is when any driver get busy with something ales while he/she driving. For example, a lot of accident happened when someone was thinking about something and distention to the road or some of them makes an accident because they were talking in the phone. In this case also it affects on other people lives.
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