Final Draft.

Mamdouh Alshammari

Writing Gold A

26 4 2010

Poverty

Poverty is one of the important problems that the world is suffering from right now. There are more than 1, 02 billion hungry people living in the world. They live in shelters and most of them live on the street. They have no job and no money they even die because of poverty. Poor people may get killed or may kill for living in this world. The causes of poverty are more than five or ten, but I will talk about two causes: overpopulation and rising standards of living and cost of living.

Currently the world's population is more than six billion, and more than a quarter is suffering from poverty. Whenever there is a rapid population growth, poverty grows with it. In fact, every day around the world, people are born and people die so it increases and decreases the population is related to population growth. China has the world's largest population, about 1,307 billion. I think the problem is not about the population growth, the problem is about how to save the increasing of the population, because if the number of population growing the world will be an uncomfortable place.

Everyone, whose lives in this world must have a problem with the poverty whether if he was rich or poor. Everyone can change his life, but the problem is with the government and how does the government control the population and the standards of living and coast of living.

Rising standards of living and coast of living, and today's goods which rose more and more. In fact, that makes some people can’t live and that makes them more uncomfortable also. Some of people want to live a good life but they can’t because of this problem. You may be shock when you see people live in the street, but that’s happening now in this world and because of rising standars and cost of living.

In conclusion, those two causes of poverty I just talked about are the biggest ones. Poverty, in fact, is dangerous and is a big dilemma, every country in our world is suffering from it. I hope that this problem can be resolved, so people can live in a beautiful and a comfortable life.

Second Draft

Mamdouh Alshammari

Writing Gold A

Poverty

Poverty is one of the important problems that the world is suffering from it right now. Where living in the world more than a 1, 02 billion hungry people, they live in shelters and most of them live in the street. They have no job and no money they even die and the causes is poverty. Poor people maybe get killed or maybe they kill for living in this world. The causes of poverty are more than five or ten, but I will talk about two causes: overpopulation and rising standards of living and cost of living.

The world's population currently is more than six billion, and more than a quarter is suffering from poverty. Whenever rapid population growth whenever the poverty grows with it. In fact every day around the world, people born and people die so increased and decreases the population is related to population growth. China has the world's largest population, where the population of China is about 1,307 billion. I think the problem is not the population growth the problem is how to save the increasing of the population.

Everyone, whose lives in this world must have a problem with the poverty let alone the rich people I mean everyone who’s in the middle class. Everyone can change his life, but the problem is with the government and who does the government controlling the population and the standards of living and coast of living.

rising standards of living and coast of living and today goods which rose and raised more and more, and that makes some of people can’t live and that makes them more uncomfortable also. It’s just some of people want to live a good life but they can’t because of this problem. You maybe shocked when you see people live in the street, well that’s happening now in this world and because of rising standing and cost of living.

In conclusion, those two causes of poverty I just talked about are the most problems can’t be resolved or the world can’t fix it. Poverty in fact is a dangerous and big dilemma, every country in our world suffering from it. I hope that this problem can be resolved, so people can live in a beautiful and comfortable life.

Free Writing.

first draft.

Poverty is one of the important problems that the world is suffering from it right now. We are living in the world more than a 1, 02 billion hungry people, they live in shelters and most of them live in the street. They have no job and no money they even die and the causes is poverty. Poor people maybe get killed or maybe they kill for living in this world. The causes of poverty are more than five or ten, but I will talk about two causes: overpopulation and rising standards of living and cost of living. The world's population currently is more than six billion, and more than a quarter is suffering from poverty. Whenever rapid population growth whenever the poverty grows with it, unemployment grows with these two.

final draft.

Mamdouh Alshammari

Writing Gold A 2

Careless driving

I would like to write about careless driving, the world is suffering from this problem. However, driving without focusing will cause many problems or may it will cause death. I choose this topic because of an accident happened with me when I was a teenager, and I chose it because a lot of people lose their lives around the world. There are many causes, but I will talk about drunk driver, driving without license and using cell phone while driving.

One of the causes is drunk drivers, when they drive they could make an accident that effect some families, like run over human being or hitting children, it could even kill someone. But the government became very strict about that. So, in this case when the police catch some drunk drivers they always get their driver license for few months and give them ticket, also sometimes they sent them to the court.

Second cause, driving without license actually in this case it may be less dangerous than drunk drivers but it still may go to make an accident also. Young people don’t know what the law rules are when they drive. In this case they maybe affect their selves by breaking the rules, or also affect other people life by hitting someone walking or even hitting other drivers. It is not allowed to young people driving cars. So, in this case also the government became strict about that. Although, when the police catch some young people driving a car they may look at his case and let him go if he doesn’t break the law. But they may not let him go until one of his/her parents come.

The third cause, it is when any driver get busy with something ales while he/she driving. For example, a lot of accident happened when someone was thinking about something and distention to the road or some of them makes an accident because they were talking in the phone. In this case also it affects on other people lives. But the governments take this case which is maybe the easiest one of them, but it is more common the police most of the time ignore those who is talking by the phone during they are driving. But they can’t catch someone thinking and doesn’t pay attention to the road, because it is difficult to decide if he/she does or doesn’t pay attention.

Finally, in my opinion, people whose driving they must be more carefully and they must focus on the road. Also the government must be very strict about the rules, and be more low enforcement. People must respect the rules and do the punishment because of the mistakes they did.

Mamdouh Alshammari

Writing Gold A 2

Careless driving

i would like to write about careless driving, the world is suffering from this problem. However, driving without focusing will cause many problems or may it will cause death. I choose this topic because of an accident happened with me when I was a teenager, and I chose it because a lot of people lose their lives around the world. There are many causes, but I will talk about drunk driver, driving without license and using cell phone while driving.

one of the causes is drunk drivers, when they drive they could make an accident that effect some families, like run over hulan being or hitting children, it could even kill someone. But the government became very strict about that. So, in this case when the police catch some drunk drivers they always get their driver license for few months and give them ticket, also sometimes they sent them to the court.

second cause, driving without license actually in this case it may be less dangerous than drunk drivers but it still may go to mabke an accident also. Young people don’t know what the law rules are when they drive. In this case they maybe affect their selves by breaking the rules, or also affect other people life by hitting someone walking or even hitting other drivers. It is not allowed to young people driving cars. So, in this case also the government became strict about that. Although, when the police catch some young people driving a car they may look at his case and let him go if he doesn’t break the law. But they may not let him go until one of his/her parents come.

the third cause, it is when any driver get busy with something ales while he/she driving. For example, a lot of accident happened when someone was thinking about something and distention to the road or some of them makes an accident because they were talking in the phone. In this case also it affects on other people lives. But the governments take this case which is maybe the easiest one of them, but it is more common the police most of the time ignore those who is talking by the phone during they are driving.

Finally, in my opinion, people whose driving they must be more carefully and they must focus on the road. Also the government must be very strict about the rules, and be more low enforcement.

outlin

first draft

Careless driving

I would like to write about careless driving, the world is suffering from this problem. There are many causes, but I will talk about drunk driver, driving without license and using cell phone while driving.One of the causes is drunk drivers, when they drive they could make an accident that effect some families, like run over human being or hitting children, it could even kill someone. But the government became very strict about that. Second cause, driving without license actually in this case it may be less dangerous than drunk drivers but it still may go to make an accident also. Young people don’t know what the law rules are when they drive. The third cause, it is when any driver get busy with something ales while he/she driving. For example, a lot of accident happened when someone was thinking about something and distention to the road or some of them makes an accident because they were talking in the phone. In this case also it affects on other people lives.

Second Draft.

Mamdouh Alshammari

Wedding in KSA VS USA

I would like to compare weddings between Saudi Arabia and United States of America. I think this is big subject to cover; however, I will explain the arranged traditional marriages in Saudi Arabia and how it is way different of that in the USA. I realized it is different from the USA weddings because I went to weddings in the USA and I liked it and I saw a lot of things applied differently.

First of all, Arranged marriage is the most popular way of getting married in Saudi Arabia. Arranged marriage means the groom mother will look for a bride for her son and after the bride and the groom meet with the presence of the parents , they’ll decide if they’ll proceed with the marriage or not. The way how the groom’s mother look for a bride is she will look for girls that go with her son’s wishes in a future wife. Smart, pretty, and a nice family are usually the main things a guy needs to be in his future wife. Then, the groom’s mother will talk to her son about the girls she saw and she will talk to the bride’s family, so they will arrange time to the groom and bride to see each other and to have a chance to talk. However, most of people in the USA dating each other first after that if they like each other the man ask the woman to marry him. After that, the man should go to have his permission from bride’s father. So, the groom can propose to her, if she says “Yes” he can introduce her to his family.

Secondly, men in Saudi Arabia are responsible for providing the dowry to the bride and both families can decide what it is. The dowry is usually money, so the bride can buy a new cloth, shoes, perfume and anything she wishes for. On the other hand, for most of the families in the US, the family of the bride pays for the wedding too. The groom gives a diamond ring for the bride that usually worth 10% of his annual income.

Third, Most of people in Saudi Arabia will have separate dinner gathering usually the men will have their own dinner gathering where the groom receives congratulations from his family and friends. The average guests for the marriage, 300 guests for the men and 500 guests for the women, the women dinner gathering will have a DG or a singer until before midnight, usually. The groom’s father and brothers and the bride’s father and brothers will join the women dinner gathering where the bride and the groom will sit together in front of the guests who will dance to show their happiness. Most of people in the USA will have the marriage by gathering in a church and the father of bride will walk to the church with the bride. The bride’s father will give her hand to her husband, so she will be the groom’s responsibility from now on. The priest will declare their marriage in front family and friends. The average guests for the marriage, 150 guests.

Finally, I would say based on my experience in Saudi Arabia I saw that there’s a big difference between both weddings. Sometimes, two countries are so close geographically, yet they differ in their cultures and the way things are done. I think that it is very hard to cover everything about this topic, and that this topic is one of the most interesting topics ever.

ESSAY : COMPARISON / CONTRAST

Mamdouh Alshammari

Writing Gold A

Wedding in KSA VS USA

I would like to compare between weeding in Saudi Arabia and United States of America. I think this is big subject to cover. However, I will explain how the arrange marriage in Saudi Arabia. But it is way different that the way in USA. Because I banned wedding in the USA and I liked it. Because I saw a lot of new things are different.

first of all, Arranged marriage is the most popular way in Saudi Arabia. Arrange which means the groom mother looking for a bride to her son. The way how the groom’s mother look for a bride, she will keep her eyes on a lot of girls. Who is smart, pretty, and from nice family. Then, she will talk to her son about that. After that, she will talk to the bride’s family, so, they will arrange time to the groom and bride to see each other and have a chance to talk. however, most of people in the USA go to have his permission from bride’s father. So, the groom can propose to her, if she says “yes” he can introduce her to his family.

secondly, most of people in Saudi Arabia they pay certain amount of money that the tow families agree to. So, the bride can buy a new cloth, shoes, perfume and anything she wishes. On the other hand, most of people in the usa, the family of bride they pay for the wedding. And the groom give diamond ring for the bride usually its worth 10% of his annual income.

Third, most of people in Saudi Arabia they will have separate dinner gathering usually the men will have they own dinner Gathering where the groom resave congratulations from his family and friends. The average guests for the marriage, 300 guests for the men and 500 guests for the women, the women dinner gathering the will have a DG or singer until before midnight. The groom’s father and sons and the bride father’s and his sons, they will inter the women dinner gathering where the bride and the groom will sit together in front of the guests who will dance to show their happiness. Nevertheless, most of people in the USA they will gather in a church and the father of bride he will inter the church with the bride, the bride’s father will give her hand to her husband. So, she will be in the groom responsibility. The priest will declare their marriage in front family and friends.

Finally, I would say based on my experience since I was in Saudi Arabia. I saw that big different between the weddings even those countries near from each other. And all that depends on their culture.

free writing ..

the topic is Wedding in KSA VS USA

I would like to compare between weeding in Saudi Arabia and United States of America. I think this is big subject to cover I will explain how the arrange marriage in Saudi Arabia. But it is way different that the way in USA. Arranged marriage is the most popular way in Saudi Arabia. Arrange which means the groom mother looking for a bride to her son. However, most of people in the USA dating each other first after that if they like each other the man ask the woman to marry him. most of people in Saudi Arabia the man pay certain amount of money that the tow families agree to. On the other hand, most of people in the USA, the family of bride they pay for the wedding. Most of people in Saudi Arabia they will have separate dinner gathering usually the men will have they own dinner gathering where the groom resave congratulations from his family and friends. Most of people in the USA, the average guests for the marriage, 300 guests.

Argumentative Essay

1- Introduction

-your topic
-summarize other person's point of view

2- Body
-Conclusion
-Statement's the other list
-introduction
-models of essay

3- Summarize your main points
-restate your thesis statment

A.

2.The United States Operates Under a two-party system,just like Great Britain.

3. The British Parliament has two separate houses,the House of Commons and the House of Lords,similar to the United States Congress, has two separate houses,the Senate and the House of Representatives.

4. The U.S House of Representatives, similar to the British House of Commons.

5. The members of the U.S House of Representatives is the same as the members of the British House of Commons, they are elected by district.

6. The method of choosing Cabinet members in the United States and Great Britain are the same.

7. In Great Britain, like the U.S, the president and the minister appoints the cabinet.

8. The British monarch has the right to veto any law passed by Parliament is like the U.S president has the right to veto any law by Congress.

B.

1. My hair is similar to my cousin's hair.

2. my brother and i are the same, because we are twin.

3. Saudi's education, just like Kuwaiti's education, they have a lot of religious subjects.

Summary.2

The English language is the most popular language in the world. Not because it is easy to learn but because it is the language of business and diplomacy, it's the language of the important thing in the life. Some times this language will be confusion for the native speakers because it has a lot of phrases.

Summary.1

The English language is no longer seen as likely to become a dominant. Because the other language are developing and English is important as second language.

Para.3

People should change their way about how they think when they try to do stuff that wouldn't help in the earth. Other then those things in the space without any point of improving it.

Para.2

How can for those who goes to the space "let the steam off". Best friends when they spend a lot of time with each other that would effect their relationship.

Para.1

Another problem is how Eo deal with astronauts is the of time that they spend in the darkness.

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